From: Received: from homiemail-a61.g.dreamhost.com ([208.97.132.208] verified) by media-motion.tv (CommuniGate Pro SMTP 6.1.0) with ESMTPS id 6417331 for AE-List@media-motion.tv; Sat, 10 Mar 2018 22:55:40 +0100 Received: from homiemail-a61.g.dreamhost.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by homiemail-a61.g.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1EE9C578077 for ; Sat, 10 Mar 2018 13:59:55 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha1; c=relaxed; d=nbcarroll.com; h= message-id:from:to:in-reply-to:subject:date:content-type: mime-version; s=nbcarroll.com; bh=Lbe/TslclCyfNy0KCwwNn6VR/IA=; b=D3Zn9CzffMg/2LUEZdLkDWPBazRuLvLGn4BljID1h8PpJwB0SebKSZfrOyJEp MI8HZRFI3LvvQwUaCaOuT0+A9UjOfdtL/vM7iURaxwO9lSVBZUfqd3qZeR0fIx96 tRtXPKYq4LwQZyenLHJNPdTSJb1fcPi1QBG2drUNhSSaIs= Received: from localhost (alc-nat.dreamhost.com [66.33.206.8]) (using TLSv1 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) (Authenticated sender: nbcarroll@nbcarroll.com) by homiemail-a61.g.dreamhost.com (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 1A484578071 for ; Sat, 10 Mar 2018 13:59:55 -0800 (PST) Message-Id: To: "After Effects Mail List" X-Mailer: Atmail 7.8.0.2 X-Originating-IP: 50.90.25.242 in-reply-to: Subject: Re: End Title Test - feedback needed Date: Sat, 10 Mar 2018 13:59:55 -0800 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="=_a319458fd8ad39ac9068df0cde71e0e7" MIME-Version: 1.0 --=_a319458fd8ad39ac9068df0cde71e0e7 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable You have a typo in the first column: "JLibrary of Congress."=0A=0A"Speci= al Thanks" comes way before "Very Special Thanks"?=0A=0ALooks like you c= ould use a less-condensed typeface, which would aid=0Areadability. Rever= se type is tough enough without it being narrow.=0A --=_a319458fd8ad39ac9068df0cde71e0e7 Content-Type: text/html; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable You have a typo in the first column: "JLibrary of Congress."
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"Special Thanks" comes way before "Very Special Thanks"?

Look= s like you could use a less-condensed typeface, which would aid readabil= ity. Reverse type is tough enough without it being narrow.
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